Rantity rant rant!
Apr. 22nd, 2005 11:49 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
kengrArgh! I cannot *believe* some "writers".
I've been reading some Buffy fan fic that is sort of linked to the "Naked in school" universe.
The author's spelling and grammar weren't too bad. I've managed to enjoy *far* worse.
I started to get a bit bugged when he specified a group of 10 people involved in "the Program". I could understand not naming all of them. But then he had someone in public refer to three of them by name during an introduction and then not name the others (trust me, the way he did it was such that this just *didn't* work).
And there were other things. But what led to this rant was when he has one girl ask another is she can give her a *blow job*. No, I'm not kidding.
And only a couple paragraphs later he has another pair of girls going at it and refers to one as *fellating* the other!!!!
Look, if you are gonna write porn, especially porn involving a gender or orientation other than your own, do a bit of reading and research so you don't make a fool of yourself and insult your readers' intelligence.
Another thing, so far I have yet to see any evidence that the writer knows anything about female genitalia either. Well, he seems to know that there's a hole down there.
I've been reading some Buffy fan fic that is sort of linked to the "Naked in school" universe.
The author's spelling and grammar weren't too bad. I've managed to enjoy *far* worse.
I started to get a bit bugged when he specified a group of 10 people involved in "the Program". I could understand not naming all of them. But then he had someone in public refer to three of them by name during an introduction and then not name the others (trust me, the way he did it was such that this just *didn't* work).
And there were other things. But what led to this rant was when he has one girl ask another is she can give her a *blow job*. No, I'm not kidding.
And only a couple paragraphs later he has another pair of girls going at it and refers to one as *fellating* the other!!!!
Look, if you are gonna write porn, especially porn involving a gender or orientation other than your own, do a bit of reading and research so you don't make a fool of yourself and insult your readers' intelligence.
Another thing, so far I have yet to see any evidence that the writer knows anything about female genitalia either. Well, he seems to know that there's a hole down there.
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Date: 2005-04-23 08:52 pm (UTC)I know about the prostate, just haven't quite figured out how much detail I really want to go into - or how to do it without being boring, especially as I'm writing this more to be titillating than as something to jerk off to.
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Date: 2005-04-23 10:00 pm (UTC)You don't. If you "let it happen" you'll ejaculate (without an orgasm, a very strange but pleasant sensation).
It's much better if the anal stimulation is combined with genital stimulation.
And I've gone into more detail than you'll probably put in, but I suspect it'll come in handy if you decided to get less vague. Background to let what you *do* write come out "correct".
Oh yeah, on oral sex, I assume you know about the problems with gag reflexes and with teeth?
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Date: 2005-04-23 10:03 pm (UTC)Another problem with oral sex is that you can get sore (mouth or tongue, even neck) if it takes the guy you are performing oral sex on too long to "get off".
Rather frustrating for all involved.
I imagine this and the teeth and gag reflex stuff would be useful if you ever decide to do a story about their "first time" fumblings.
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Date: 2005-04-23 11:01 pm (UTC)Rather like clitoral stimulation, then.
And I have a pretty good idan of the difficulties involved in oral sex having some experience of the matter myself :-)
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Date: 2005-04-24 12:44 am (UTC)