Rantity rant rant!

[kengr]

Argh! I cannot *believe* some "writers".



I've been reading some Buffy fan fic that is sort of linked to the "Naked in school" universe.

The author's spelling and grammar weren't too bad. I've managed to enjoy *far* worse.

I started to get a bit bugged when he specified a group of 10 people involved in "the Program". I could understand not naming all of them. But then he had someone in public refer to three of them by name during an introduction and then not name the others (trust me, the way he did it was such that this just *didn't* work).

And there were other things. But what led to this rant was when he has one girl ask another is she can give her a *blow job*. No, I'm not kidding.

And only a couple paragraphs later he has another pair of girls going at it and refers to one as *fellating* the other!!!!

Look, if you are gonna write porn, especially porn involving a gender or orientation other than your own, do a bit of reading and research so you don't make a fool of yourself and insult your readers' intelligence.

Another thing, so far I have yet to see any evidence that the writer knows anything about female genitalia either. Well, he seems to know that there's a hole down there.

Comments

[iamjw.livejournal.com]

Ummm, I'm almost afraid to ask this, but why "guys their age" particularly (bearing in mind that they're in their early 20's as this is set)as opposed to men generally?

[kengr]

I meant "their age" as opposed to *younger*. Until you are well into puberty the target(s) are small to non-existent.

I had younger on my mind because of when I learned that bit about how good a leg sized object between the legs can feel. :-)

[iamjw.livejournal.com]

Ah. Okay.
(and you know you're dying to tell me the story , so just go ahead :-))

[kengr]

Well, if you *insist* (truthfully, I was either going to let it drop or make an LJ entry asking a *very* odd question).

When I was in 4th or 5th grade (say 10-12) I was playing around on the swingset. Basicly a couple A-frames of metal tubing with another tube joining the tops of the As. From the cross tube hung a couple of swings and a two person thing with seats facing each other.

I was try to "shinny up" one of the legs of an A-frame. I'd get part way up and slide down a but as I couldn't maintain a tight enough grip.

All of a sudden there was this *wonderful* feeling in my groin. I tried to duplicate it, but I couldn't figure out what exactly I'd *done*. So I gave up after 10 minutes or so.

Yes, I managed to *accidentally* give myself an orgasm! Not not be sure how.

[iamjw.livejournal.com]

Y'know, either I've heard this before or you are not the only person to have experienced this. Seems all my time spent actually *swinging* on the swing set could have been better spent :-)

[kengr]

Well, I'm told that for females, swinging can be quite fun with a good set of ben wa balls in place. <eg>

And I'm stll amazed that I couldn't "get it right" again *and* that I let the matter drop after trying for no more than 15 minutes.