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kengr ([personal profile] kengr) wrote2003-10-12 10:19 pm

Boy part 2 (erotica)

Ok, here's part two. Things are still pretty tame.



Then he saw where they were. It was a beauty parlor. Oh no, surely mom wouldn't...

She ordered him out of the car, and he followed her in trying not to think about what might be in store.

She told him to sit down and wait in a chair. Then went over to talk to a woman. After a few minutes they came over to him.

"So this is your new 'daughter', Grace?"

"Yes, and I want 'her' hair styled to look more reasonable. It can't be too feminine, because of school. But it shouldn't be masculine."

"Ah. Sort of unisex, leaning towards female then?"

"Yes. That's it."

"I suppose that means we can't do a full makeover though."

"Not this time." his mother replied.

He shivered at the look she gave him when she put the emphasis on "this".

"Well, I think we can still shape the eyebrows and lashes and give him a manicure. And maybe some clear polish?"

"Yes, that sounds about right."

They led him back to a char where the woman started working on his hair, while another woman started to work on his hands.

His mother looked at him and said "I've got some more shopping to do. They'll give you bus fare when they're done. I'll be home before you are. I trust that for once I won't have to worry about you coming straight home, will I?"

Oh god, he was going to have to take the bus home. Dressed like this?

He wanted to get up from the chair and run, but he knew it wouldn't do any good.

He sat there in a daze as the women worked on his hair, face and hands.

When they finished, they turned him around and he saw himself in the mirror. His hair and face weren't that different, but now he was looking at a stranger. A girl.

They gave him the bus fare and pointed him towards the bus stop on the corner.

He sat there, wishing he dared cry. At last the bus came and he got on.

Leonard had been riding for a few blocks when some boys got on the bus. They sat near him and were obviously looking him over.

He tried not to look at them. Then they started having their idea of fun.

"Hey cutie! I bet a fine girl like you would love what I've got for you." said one, obviously groping himself so Leonard could see his thick dick thru the chino's the boy was wearing.

Others started making other comments, and getting cruder about it.

Since Leonard had sat at the back of the bus, to avoid people, the driver couldn't really see or hear what was going on.

The boys got bolder.

"Hey baby, I bet you'd love to take my cock down your white throat. Oh yeah baby!"

Leonard blushed beet red, which only encouraged them.

"You need to find out what a real man's cock is like, not them wimpy white boys you hang out with..."

When Leonard's stop arrived, it was all he could do to get up and walk past the boys. And as he did so, One pinched him and another slapped his ass.

He ran off the bus, as they laughed their heads off. Leonard got from the bus stop to his house without any problems. For once he was thankful that he didn't have many friends and that none of them lived nearby.

[identity profile] jackdragon.livejournal.com 2003-12-14 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
This is very tame. I was expecting worse. You should try to progress more of course. You have a good groundwork and should continue. Let's see where it goes.

[identity profile] jackdragon.livejournal.com 2003-12-15 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the humiliation aspect of your character on the bus. I do feel a bit of anticipation to see how worse your worse is. I did a story of a guy dressed as a girl and a woman dressed as a man and doing him anally. So we'll see what your mind comes up with. I have many ideas already, but that is just me.