Well, so far you are doing great. The only thing that even comes close to being an "excuse me?" is this:
Paul growled and rounded on John, pushing him up against the wall. Closing in, he pushed his hands up under the other’s shirt, thrust a thigh in between his legs, took John’s mouth in his, claiming it for his own.
I know it's possible to get a guy off with something about leg sized moving between his legs. (yues, there's a tale there :-)
But with guys their age you don't want to just "thrust" a leg in there. Or you are apt to have a rather unpleasant effect.
"Let's be careful out there..."
Seriously, it's a *very* minor nit. I'm just overly sensitive to that issue because I tend to be *way* more vulnerable to that sort of accident compared with most guys.
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Paul growled and rounded on John, pushing him up against the wall. Closing in, he pushed his hands up under the other’s shirt, thrust a thigh in between his legs, took John’s mouth in his, claiming it for his own.
I know it's possible to get a guy off with something about leg sized moving between his legs. (yues, there's a tale there :-)
But with guys their age you don't want to just "thrust" a leg in there. Or you are apt to have a rather unpleasant effect.
"Let's be careful out there..."
Seriously, it's a *very* minor nit. I'm just overly sensitive to that issue because I tend to be *way* more vulnerable to that sort of accident compared with most guys.