God help me...

I volunteered to help someone who is writing a new NiS story.

Their spelling is pretty good. Their grammar is so so. And their sentence structure is driving me nuts.

In their defense, I believe that English isn't their native language. But I'm playing English teacher. And having to explain things like:

Don't have multiple topics or scenes in a single paragraph.

Don't run sentences together

Don't stick commas in where they don't belong...

Writing tip...

(From an authors list I'm on)

Capitalization is the difference between helping your Uncle Jack off a horse and helping your uncle jack off a horse.

Which drew this response:

And for those who don't know when to put a comma before a name, notice the difference below:

"Let's eat, Grandma."
"Let's eat Grandma."